Descriptive Narrative -Ruins

 Hello,

Today our task was to write the problem arising to an image. This is the one we used ⬇

The frigid, dull and imprisoning ambiance of base was becoming slightly familiar. We have only been here about a week since the attack and I already feel like I’m living with a second family. 

I drove my bike through the rough terrain slowly making my way to the shack where I would take a break from patrol. ‘Finally’ I quietly thought to myself as I parked my bike on the side of the shack. Jumping off my bike I sauntered into the shack and gently placed my helmet on the table.

Along my arrival I was greeted by some of my most fellow comrades, Ellis, Emery, Briar and Haven. Greetings over we got straight to work, discussing new ideas and safety methods to protect the ill-fated villagers. 

As soon as it started, it was over. Heading out I noticed something inky float across the sky, consumed by wonder I leaped onto my bike and raced towards the same direction as the dusky object. 

I stopped. What is that?

Activity 1 - Holiday diary

Hello, 

This task was to create a diary of your holidays. I didn't get to do everyday but I got the majority done. Next time I definitely would have tried to do every day.

Here it is ⬇️

Activity 4 - Animal Town 🐴

Hello, 

This activity was to use the story starter and image to write a short story. I didn't really have a plot idea so I just wrote a little bit about 'someone's' first steps in animal town. 

Here it is ⬇️

Matariki Story

 Hello,

In class recently we have been writing narratives. Our topic was something related to Matariki in some way. I found this easy as I worked with a partner the entire time. Our next step is to write our problem arising.

Here's our orientation ⮯

Sheltered by extensive mountains a dulcet breeze sways through a quaint, picturesque town, illuminated by warmth, radiating from the glistening sun. Aletheia, Fawn, wavy hair gliding in the wind, overshadowing her heavenly face. Emerald eyes glimmering with optimism and sending contentment to others around her aura. Amira, short, disheveled hair colored a winsome golden sits atop of a fair, slender profile. Deep purple eyes reflecting a kind positivity onto others. Her clothing very softly colored. A cheeky, impatient and adventurous young woman with the mindset of an innocent child.

The trolls -Blogging activity

Hello,

This is my sixth blogging acitivity

Our task was to complete a piece of writing about trolls in our own words

Here is mine ⬇️

A day in the life - Holiday blogging task

Hello,

This is my 3rd blogging activity 

Our task this time was to be creative and write the day in the life of a random household object.

I chose a hairbrush 

My task is below ⬇️

Wolverine writing

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This week we were learning to write facts in our own words

Our task was to do this with the animal Wolverines

My writing ↓

Wolverine Writing - Shanaya

Wolverines are formidable animals; their appearance resembles a small bear but they are actually the largest animal in the weasel family.

Wolverines have a partial vegetarian diet considering they eat things like plants and berries but this does not make up their entire diet. They are vigorous animals with a desire for meat. They can easily slaughter smaller animals such as rabbits and rodents and sometimes they’ll attempt to slaughter animals twice their size such as elk, deer and caribou. Individual wolverines may travel about fifteen miles in search for food.

Male Wolverines scent-mark their territories but share them with several female wolverines, they are believed to be polygamous. Females den in the snow or similar cover to give birth to two or three young kits. Female wolverines will care for their kits until they reach their reproductive age at about two years old.

Narrative Writing - The Hillsburn Disaster

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Our Task today was to complete and publish our narrative writing that we started a few weeks ago. My Narrative is called The Hillsburn disaster. To sum it up its about two poor siblings that live in an apartment in Hillsburn city who come home from work one day only to see that their apartment had set on fire.

My writing ↓

The Hillsburn Disaster

“Hurry up Lindsay!” Mateo bellowed from across the apartment.

“I’m coming just hold on a second jeez!” Lindsay wailed.

Mateo ran out the door while shouting “I’m Leaving without you!”. Hearing this made Lindsay grab her bag and race out the door at full speed just so she could catch up to her brother. Unsurprisingly Lindsay caught up to Mateo and they were now walking calmly next to each other down the boardwalk of Hillsburn City. Mateo is a quiet, reluctant and wise person whereas Lindsay is more athletic and extroverted. Mateo prefers to wear neutral tones and does not like to stand out while on the other hand Lindsay likes to wear pastel colours and standing out isn’t her favourite but also isn’t that complex of a task for her.

It was a clement day in Hillsburn city, morning mist traveling through the air calmly. Mateo was finishing off his shift at their local coffee shop and started getting ready to head back home. Meanwhile next door Lindsay had finished her shift at the bakery and was waiting for Mateo outside. Mateo and Lindsay had started walking back. 

“Hey Mateo?” Lindsay spoke.

“Yeah,” Mateo answered.

“Do you see that smoke over there?” Lindsay pointed towards a cloud of smoke floating in the sky.

Mateo’s eyes gleamed with horror. In a panic Mateo roughly seized Lindsay’s hand and started dashing towards the puff of smoke. 

“Mateo what are you doing!” Lindsay shrieked as she was practically being dragged along the boardwalk, Mateo’s mind was flooded with panic as he continued to dash along the boardwalk longing to see what had actually happened. It had been about a minute, Mateo and Lindsay were still darting towards the source of the smoke cloud when Mateo came to a sudden stop.

“Mateo what the h-” Lindsay spoke before she was interrupted by the sound of..

Water.. Large amounts of water gushing all over Mateo and Lindsay's apartment building. Lindsay stayed silent, she didn’t say a single word she just gazed as her home slowly fell apart. Tears slowly started falling down her cheeks as she continued to gaze upon the burnt building. Mateo wrapped his arm around Lindsay’s shoulders as she continued to pour out her tears. Because of the incident Mateo and Lindsay were given a hotel room to stay in for the night but the next day they would have to find their own place. 

It was a foggy morning, condensation from the windows pooling on the floor. Mateo grunted as he got out of bed and went to the hotel bathroom where he found Lindsay brushing her teeth. 

“Morning..” Mateo muttered.

“Good morning,” Lindsay muffled with her toothbrush still in her mouth. Mateo went to grab his toothbrush and toothpaste and had started to brush his teeth. 

“What are we gonna do..” Lindsay murmured.

“I don’t know but we’ll figure something out,” Mateo sighed. Mateo and Lindsay were packing up their things to head out. 

Once they had packed up their things they stepped out of the hotel, returned the room key and set off to their part time jobs. 

Mateo stepped into the coffee shop and instantly got to work. He would need all the hours he could get to get him and Lindsay into some sort of home. Meanwhile next door Lindsay also quickly got to work. Lindsay had less hours of work by default so she would have to request her boss to give her a few more. Mateo was making a coffee for a customer when one of his coworkers came in.

“Hey Mateo!” Wyatt cried, “Phone call for you!”

“Please give me a second ma’am,” Mateo stated to his customer as he ran off to answer the phone.

 “Lindsay someones on the phone for you!” Lindsay’s boss shouted out. Lindsay ran off to answer the phone. The news they heard on the phone left them gobsmacked. What was the news?

Dialogue

Dialogue is a writing style particularly focused in writing conversations

Here is a photo and under is an example of dialogue 

“Why did I agree to do this?” Gerald wailed, “You should’ve brought Janet instead!”

“I probably should’ve brought Janet, she would be screaming way less than you right now!” Semira sneered.

“Well, if I die it's your fault!” Gerald bellowed.

“You’re not gonna die you big baby!” Semira asserted, “Look, we’re almost down!”

“This is it, I’m gonna die!” Gerald cried “I love you mom, I love you dad!”

“Gerald you’re not gonna die!” Semira exclaimed

Dialogue uses speech marks that sit on both sides of the text that a character is speaking.

You must place a piece of punctuation at the end of your dialogue

Example :

"Go away" Sarah cried ❌

Or

"Go away!" Sarah cried ✅

The piece of punctuation has to sit inside the ending speech mark

If you have no need for a question mark or exclamation

mark then you can just use a comma

Example :

"Thank you," Jenna replied

Narrative Writing

Hi I'm Shanaya and this is my first blog post for 2021. I'm a year 6 at Kawakawa primary school. We have been learning about narrative writing and have also been creating some of our own narratives. We first watched 2 mini movies called "The Snack Attack" and "The Present" and then we picked one to write a narrative about. I chose the Snack attack.

 

The Importance of Diversity Published (Writing)

 

Hey Bloggers! 

For this task we had to publish the writing we did on diversity 

I found it quick and easy to publish 

My next step would be to use something else to publish 

Yours truly 

-Shanaya

The Aftons ... ( Choice writing )

Hey Bloggers ! For this post we had to do a piece of writing completly of our choice I did a piece of writing on the Aftons I learned a lot about the aftons! I found this task tricky to get everything on there My next step would be to add wayyyyy more information Yours truly - Shanaya

Kawakawa Oil ! 😊

Hey Bloggers!
This week we've been talking a lot about kawakawa oil
Our task was to write a procedure on how to make kawakawa oil😊
I learned how to set out a procedure properly
I found this task hard at first but was easier at the end since I realised every thing.
Next time I'll write a bit of a more specific recipe.
Overall this task was easy
We haven't actually made the oil yet 😂 But we might soon
Yours truly
- Shanaya     

Beach Writing !

Hey bloggers
Our task today was to write a moment in time about the beach trip we took on monday.
                                                             This is mine ➝
Our Walt was
Learn to write a moment in time.


I did not find it to tricky because it was an easy topic.
Next time I will put in a few more sentences.

Yours truly,
Shanaya

The Missing diamond ( Free Writing )

Hey bloggers
This is my narrative I wrote myself hope you like it.

Animal Report Planning

↥This is my animal report planning slide about goldfish. 
I haven't completely finished but 
is their something that I should find out about goldfish. 

Writing

I am learning to add more writing  in my stories.

The easy part was planning my writing out.

My next step is to add more detail to my writing.💡✍
Writing is fun easy and you can do it anytime.💡✍