Hey Bloggers!( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
For this task we had to Write a Sensory Poem about lockdown
We were Learning to write a Poem using our Senses about Lockdown
I found thinking of what each sense was quite easy but I found putting this into a sentence more tricky .
I think Next time I will add more things about each Sense.
Stay Safe!
Yours truly-
Shanaya
This is a great poem Shanaya! It was definitely weird looking out the window and seeing/hearing no cars on the roads. This is something we probably won't see again for a long time, even if it was great for our environment!
ReplyDeleteI like that you listened to my feedback and added more detail to your sentences, making them much more powerful. Next time you could add more than one thing in each sense to really paint a picture :)
Awesome work!